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America has a choice

At BoingBoing Mark Frauenfelder noticed that our tax dollars are funding RNC propaganda.

What he missed was that the President is badly in need of a press release writer. I fixed the paragraph:

America has a choice: It can continue to blow the economy and create no jobs as the President's policies are doing; or it can raise taxes on the American rich and some dodging businesses, helping economic recovery and future job creation.

See what you can do with a few better word choices?

Posted by Temple of Me at 3:09 on Apr 21, 2007

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This paragraph is straight press release style. The funny thing is, the jargon of a summary statement typically has something to do with the "facts" presented above in the release; this copy has nothing to do with the statement above.
# Posted by: Brad Isaacs at April 26, 2007 09:17 AM